nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

Have You Ever Seen A Bird's Trail In The Barren Sky? - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The young stubborn birds fly away from their parent's nest
When they feel their wings are strong enough
And the mysterious destination wasn't written in the sky yet
But they insist to fly without their Guardian's consent.

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  • (7/1/2008 8:49:00 PM)


    You have penned a lonely mood. The barren sky denotes emptiness. Something has been lost that can never be replaced again. Good use of metaphor.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 1, 2008



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