Having...Text! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Having...Text!

Rating: 5.0


Immobile
I gaze at

my mobile

loving the last
text

you sent

seeing as that’s all I can have of you
for the present.

The train eager
to bring me closer to

your nearness

our kiss now only
a mere half hour away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 06 October 2008

Reading this I was thinking about messaging in verses. Short mobile poems. Haiku for mobile. Lovely little poem, I like it. I wonder if the text you gazed was in verse :) ?

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Janice Windle 06 October 2008

Yes, those messages that have to stand in for us when we are apart... I don't know how we survived without mobiles back in the Dark Ages. You've said it in a very few words as usual. You're very good at text too, my love...

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Martin Swords 05 October 2008

vry gud..............m

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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