Dónall Dempsey

Veteran Poet - 1,546 Points (15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

Having...Text! - Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Immobile
I gaze at

my mobile

loving the last
text

you sent

seeing as that’s all I can have of you
for the present.

The train eager
to bring me closer to

your nearness

our kiss now only
a mere half hour away.


Comments about Having...Text! by Dónall Dempsey

  • Onelia Avelar (10/6/2008 3:12:00 PM)

    Reading this I was thinking about messaging in verses. Short mobile poems. Haiku for mobile. Lovely little poem, I like it. I wonder if the text you gazed was in verse :) ? (Report)Reply

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  • Janice Windle (10/6/2008 12:39:00 PM)

    Yes, those messages that have to stand in for us when we are apart... I don't know how we survived without mobiles back in the Dark Ages. You've said it in a very few words as usual. You're very good at text too, my love... (Report)Reply

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  • Martin Swords (10/5/2008 11:19:00 AM)

    vry gud..............m (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 26, 2009


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