He's Away. Poem by Fay Slimm

He's Away.

Rating: 5.0


Sailed through the distance
On rolling-wet waters.
Out of my vision.
In heaving white foam.
My lover is gone now
Over the oceons.
Already my heart aches
For his coming home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Petz 15 December 2008

Would that I had your 'Human Touch' Wonderful! !

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James Timothy Jarrett 15 August 2008

I can feel the emotion in this poem, Very nice.10

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Bob Gibson 11 August 2008

Such a beautiful poem, there is such melancholy to see a ship sailing away, a little piece of my heart goes with it

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Ernestine Northover 08 August 2008

Ah, how poignant. Short, but it says it all. The pining for his return. Lovely. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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