' He's In My Dream ' Poem by Riquetta Elliott

' He's In My Dream '

Rating: 3.5


I am covered in heavy cloth
In peace.
I closed my eyes and
Visioned a friend as in
My lover.
As I dream in the mind, I dream that
He is with me.
As we were in covers, our bodies
Attach.
As I touch him, he touch me.
When I kiss him, he kiss me.
Something amazed that him and I
Was going to make and yes we
Undressed naked.
We were about to begin with the sexual experience,
But the eyes of mine was open.
He was gone.
Then I have a wish of saying I
Wish the presence of my lover who
Called himself a 'Black Fabio' will come
Back into my dreams again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 09 January 2009

very very sweet piece. i liked it

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A sweet dreamy poem. As if I entered into a dream like this piece!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2008

...words successfully captured the dream.....10

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Thompson Oyonmi 22 May 2008

This is a good masterpiece...pretty cool

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Jared Ashby 21 May 2008

i wonder if hope of the future can be enough.

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Vipins Puthooran 25 December 2011

Sweet and wonderful poem///

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Fay Slimm 24 February 2009

Very inventive and equally well worded - - a good write and a ten from me -- Fay..

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Catrina Heart 19 February 2009

Beautiful poetic story, you have narrated well...Thanks for the share...10+++

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 07 February 2009

That's a beautiful poem! A nice story, just check your grammar. I love it, don't give up; keep on writing. Great inspiration!

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Riquetta Elliott 06 February 2009

You mean one error :)

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Riquetta Elliott

Riquetta Elliott

Baltimore, Maryland
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