He's Left The Building Poem by Scotty Dogg

He's Left The Building

Rating: 3.3


White sparkle shades grinning
your bell bottoms. Tacky.
Not much of a bulge. The girls screamed.

Slur your lyrics. Me, wishing I had that
guitar to snuggle up with, and she
wants to blow those blue shoes.

Scotty was the star for me as you
rocked the chain gang chorus. Wow!
Eyes deeper than inky ink wells,

and pocks like me; so what,
because those hips shimmy shaked.
Go home now, and swallow what-

ever it is you swallow; drinking
everything in sight. Get fat too.
We don’t care: you’re still cool.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laughing@ You 08 November 2013

LOVE....the scarcity of words...not overly adjectival....power punches (which I live for - mean as a pittie, as you know) ....

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Sandy Player 31 December 2012

.........Enjambment!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 July 2012

Good piece. Made me smile. Thanks.

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Jonny Brackney 14 December 2011

i enjoy this one. reminds me of being at concerts, wishing i were in the singers place...i don't go to them anymore for that exact reason.

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