Heart Bit Poem by bipin sankaliya

strong emotions well done

Interesting. Makes one curious of it. I like that!

hmmm u hav an interesting mind

nice sad lyric poem.keep writing

is it only 3 lines? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? /not making any sense 2me

A good start with a nice poem, Bipin sankaliya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

hmmm interesting write. alot of hurt n anger portrayed in your lethal verse.

Maybe your stupid girl bit and care! ! ! Passion and angry walk hands to hands! ! !

I feel a lot of hurt in this poem. Wow, You spoke from the core.

short, simple but so full of emotions.......a talent indeed thank you for sharing sir payal