You tinkered
with my heart
took it apart
put it back together
in 5
seconds flat!
'Howzat! '
you smiled.
A cog wheel
a too stretched spring
a nut...a bolt
a loose screw
remained!
'Don't worry...'
you grinned
'You don't need
those! '
'It will worked just fine
minus a sadness or two
or a hurt here or there! '
'Tip-top! '
it chimed
like an emotional
clock.
'I hope you don't mind
but
I synchronised it with
mine! '
'Tick! ' my heart cried.
'Tock! ' your heart replied.
usual great standard donall. great piece of imagination......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'I hope you mind but I synchronised it with mine! ' :) Heart's rhythm synchronisation! The idea and the construction of the poem are very creative. In the laboratory of love experiments all is possible. Keep experimenting with your hearts and bodies and keep the lab's diary :)