Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Heart Misses - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I can
No longer bear the pain
As I get wet in rain
Get lost like statue and remain

I raise face
To find you in any case
But fail each time in access
Eyes fail miserably to trace

I am thirsty
And pray an almighty
To provide water
From the flow of the river

It doesn’t quench the thirst
But insist
To put in more efforts
To reach in time at port

Heart
Aches in part
Sometimes miss the beat
But prepare always to meet

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 10:49:00 AM)


    welcome Kanusing Solanki, Kati Annie Rose Rose Arana
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 1:51:00 AM)


    A condescending heart always reaches out for a resolution. Good write.
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  • Rajnish Manga (9/21/2015 11:56:00 PM)


    This reminds me of the constant fight against odds and to continue struggle for reaching one's port. Nice poetry. Thanks. I quote:
    To put in more efforts
    To reach in time at port
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2015 11:38:00 PM)


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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2015 11:34:00 PM)


    Sheila Ann Anderson very nice poetic reply Hasmukh smile emoticon
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2015 11:32:00 PM)


    Heart
    Aches in part
    Sometimes miss the beat
    But prepare always to meet
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015



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