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Hearts Are Gods

Rating: 3.5

Hearts are gods just always beaten,
Yet still you leave me so defeated,
How hard is it to be-just me breathing,
My lungs ignore air and go on screaming,
I pass through life a time bomb seething,
When I blow im just left steaming,
I know the stars said im still needed,
But where’s my pair, my reason for living,
Ill show the world my hearts still beating,
Even if deaf ears lie there bleeding,

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Holly Heron 11 October 2009

Hey hate to say this bub but i were should be we're: -P otherwise this is really lovely i love the rhythm and rhyme

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Taher Al-Shemaly 22 June 2009

No one stays unbeloved........... even the hunchback of Notre Damme was beloved once... Nice poem, full of emotions, with little work on words (and some spelling) and divisions, I believe, it would be sculptured complete. Keep on going!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 22 June 2009

OOPSS. FOR STARTERS I LOVED THE TITLE OF UR POEM...LOTS OF EMOTIONS PORTRAYED HERE WITH HONESTY AND SINCERITY... POETRY IS THERAPY AFTER ALL... KEEP WRITING...GOD BLESS U

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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2009

A portrayal of self-sympathy...well penned

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