Menu
Monday, June 22, 2009

Hearts Are Gods

Rating: 3.5
Hearts are gods just always beaten,
Yet still you leave me so defeated,
How hard is it to be-just me breathing,
My lungs ignore air and go on screaming,
I pass through life a time bomb seething,
When I blow im just left steaming,
I know the stars said im still needed,
But where’s my pair, my reason for living,
Ill show the world my hearts still beating,
Even if deaf ears lie there bleeding,
What do you want,
What do I need,
Who’ll say yes,
Who will try me,
At the end were all left laughing,
Mask the pain and walk on from me,
Ill just die here, no ones watching,
The world moves on because no one loves me…
Andrew Rose
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS
Holly Heron 11 October 2009
Hey hate to say this bub but i were should be we're: -P otherwise this is really lovely i love the rhythm and rhyme
0 0 Reply
Taher Al-Shemaly 22 June 2009
No one stays unbeloved........... even the hunchback of Notre Damme was beloved once... Nice poem, full of emotions, with little work on words (and some spelling) and divisions, I believe, it would be sculptured complete. Keep on going!
0 0 Reply
Rinzu Susan Rajan 22 June 2009
OOPSS. FOR STARTERS I LOVED THE TITLE OF UR POEM...LOTS OF EMOTIONS PORTRAYED HERE WITH HONESTY AND SINCERITY... POETRY IS THERAPY AFTER ALL... KEEP WRITING...GOD BLESS U
0 0 Reply
Indira Renganathan 22 June 2009
A portrayal of self-sympathy...well penned
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

1/18/2021 3:10:49 PM # 1.0.0.397