Heaven Around Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Heaven Around

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Life is otherwise colorful
For all those who are successful
It is living hell for all those
Who fear no one and dispose off

What is not there in real journey?
Real blessings and typical mercy
All steps lead to happy end
No foes but only nice friends

So is the emergence of rainbow
That shall grow and allow
All colors to appear in sky
Give some kind of colorful boost to try

I had something to think over
Why colors hang in sky with half cover
I find them in my vision
To clear doubt without any confusion

I took eyes up and down
For real reason to be known
It was sudden emergence
That showed me some divine presence

I felt heaven around
The joy was almost found
I knell down on ground
I fell overjoyed and sound

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Life is otherwise colorful For all those who are successful

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Very deep Robert White6 minutes ago There is a real depth of emotion there and a lot of thought and feeling. You have a unique outlook on life and I thank you.

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nice Isha Chhatwal7 minutes ago Good Comment +1

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Premilah Ramnauth Beautiful..I adore rainbows: You captured this one in your words wonderfully 1 hr · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome mericel remirez n shujat ahmed, bu mugda Just now · Unlike · 1

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Lovely 5 Jun by Latrice Smith | Reply

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B- O- T- A- N Great poem 5 Jun by B- O- T- A- N | Reply

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Lucas Maddox A poet painting a perfect picture 5 Jun by Lucas Maddox | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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