Heavens Sea Poem by Cat Hodgson

Heavens Sea

Rating: 5.0


Every morning it's a trip to the Sea.
To watch the ships as they flee.
Oh Bessie can't you see,
He's never coming back to thee.

In the storm his bow did rip.
That's when he made his last trip.
Her mind just won't let it be.
It's his face she longs to see.

At the old bench is where she'll see.
The love she's lost..
On Heaven's Sea..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Recounting a tragedy and the loss and the waiting..beautiful poem.. good rhyme. Enjoyed

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 May 2016

just sent you a comment and voted it a big 10. if u hve time pl. read my poem. if you die before me. thank you tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 May 2016

Her mind just won't let it be. It's his face she longs to see....... great longing for the loved one and the sense of loss. the bench is empty. thank you for these emotions of love...... tony

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 October 2012

clouds covers wresting shadow to fall eyes seeks to see grace as hidden, quest ruffles on bay of stormy sea yet love awaits beneath old oak, beautiful write.10+++, thanks for sharing

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

A really good poem, with a beautiful flow. A great write.

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