Cathy Hodgson

Freshman - 859 Points (USA Ohio)

Heavens Sea - Poem by Cathy Hodgson

Every morning it's a trip to the Sea.
To watch the ships as they flee.
Oh Bessie can't you see,
He's never coming back to thee.

In the storm his bow did rip.
That's when he made his last trip.
Her mind just won't let it be.
It's his face she longs to see.

At the old bench is where she'll see.
The love she's lost..
On Heaven's Sea..

Comments about Heavens Sea by Cathy Hodgson

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/27/2016 5:35:00 AM)

    just sent you a comment and voted it a big 10. if u hve time pl. read my poem. if you die before me. thank you tony (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/27/2016 5:34:00 AM)

    Her mind just won't let it be.
    It's his face she longs to see....... great longing for the loved one and the sense of loss. the bench is empty.
    thank you for these emotions of love...... tony
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  • Aqua Flower (4/6/2015 6:18:00 AM)

    love the rhythm of this poem. Love lost like a ship at sea! Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (10/28/2012 4:02:00 PM)

    clouds covers wresting shadow to fall
    eyes seeks to see grace as hidden,
    quest ruffles on bay of stormy sea
    yet love awaits beneath old oak, beautiful write.10+++, thanks for sharing
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  • (11/14/2011 2:15:00 AM)

    A really good poem, with a beautiful flow.
    A great write.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, November 14, 2011

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