Heels Poem by M.J. Lemon

The way of presentation is fantastic. Really people with morals writhe are like wounded cobras. Beautiful poem.

The people maintained at the bottom of the ladder will always live in uneasiness. As a result, their 'morals writhe like wounded cobras' with a venomous tongue.

Head over heels!

Liked the phrase, like wounded cobras'. A wonderful short work dear poet Lemon

Wounded Cobras are dangerous. They are out for revenge. A powerful Senryu with a strong message........A full score 10

i'll put this in May 2019's showcase. Thanks. bri :) and i'll include this 'note': " What does it mean to be called a heel? " contemptible person, " 1914 in U.S. underworld slang, originally " incompetent or worthless criminal, " perhaps from a sense of " person in the lowest position" and thus from heel "