Her Beauty In The Nightfall Firmament Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Her Beauty In The Nightfall Firmament

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I was blindfold and they labeled me as an unfortunate soul
who wanders for a virgin.
They proposed me a virgin and said' you cannot remove the cloth
until you find a river; then you can go freely with this virgin.'
I agreed; Oh! for the first time in my life
I touched a woman's hand and it's trembling like a rabbit.
On the way she told ' please we live forever in blindfold;
we are at the bridge and I can hear the river flows.
'I have to remove and it's a must' I said.
Then I found her tears on my hand; like acidity.
Oh! her blindness brought me the utmost sadness.
And at last I decided to swim together in the upstream.

Saturday, June 3, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: blindness,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 03 June 2006

the title is exceptional. The poem itself depicts something that is very fragile and lovely..Excellent, Nimal. Kindest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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