Her Love, Loves Her. Poem by Wali Jamali

Her Love, Loves Her.

Rating: 4.8


She concedes
Her joy to morning breeze
Her happiness knows no bounds.

She sprouts
Like a blossoming petals
Leans to the corridors of wind
And whispers
My love, loves me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone with the wind 04 July 2008

Very beautifully said...like Coleridge's words..'I love my love and my love loves me'..the metaphor was very innovative...specially leans to the corridors of wind. Gul

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Seema Chowdhury 06 July 2008

Xoubiya, this is such a wonderful composition. i truly enjoyed the mood penned down by you in this lovely poem. thanks for sharing. take care

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And whispers- splaying the manna of hope of tommorow of togetherness in the barely audible syllables-

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C.Rose Hamby 22 July 2008

I felt this once! ...

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 05 December 2009

Its Nature’s Love that Poet has elaborated…great write… Ten dr.sakti

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

Like a blossoming petals Leans to the corridors of wind And whispers Rachel Ann Butler

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Omar Ali Sabar 16 August 2008

With words like these, even a small poem can make a big difference.. great stuff

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 August 2008

hi xoubiya, your wordplay is magnificent. even in short, your description is like a mirror, can see through.shabas, shabas!

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Waqas Naeem 27 July 2008

no feeling better than this, and so serenely expressed in your wonderful verse....

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