Wali Jamali

Rookie (1981 / Karachi)

Her Love, Loves Her. - Poem by Wali Jamali

She concedes
Her joy to morning breeze
Her happiness knows no bounds.

She sprouts
Like a blossoming petals
Leans to the corridors of wind
And whispers
My love, loves me!

Comments about Her Love, Loves Her. by Wali Jamali

  • (12/5/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    Its Nature’s Love that Poet has elaborated…great write…
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  • (10/11/2009 4:30:00 AM)

    Like a blossoming petals
    Leans to the corridors of wind
    And whispers

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (8/16/2008 12:08:00 PM)

    With words like these, even a small poem can make a big difference.. great stuff (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/10/2008 1:34:00 PM)

    hi xoubiya, your wordplay is magnificent. even in short, your description is like a mirror, can see through.shabas, shabas! (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2008 4:56:00 AM)

    no feeling better than this, and so serenely expressed in your wonderful verse.... (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2008 5:52:00 PM)

    I felt this once! ... (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    And whispers-

    splaying the manna of hope of tommorow of togetherness in the barely audible syllables-
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  • (7/6/2008 1:18:00 PM)

    Xoubiya, this is such a wonderful composition. i truly enjoyed the mood penned down by you in this lovely poem. thanks for sharing. take care (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2008 2:00:00 PM)

    Very beautifully said...like Coleridge's words..'I love my love and my love loves me'..the metaphor was very innovative...specially leans to the corridors of wind.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 4, 2008

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