Her Sweet Suicide Poem by Angel of Death

Her Sweet Suicide

Rating: 4.8


She's in her room
At night
In darkness

A knife
Next to her

Sadness
Depression
Fear

Moonlight
Falling through the window
Bright

But no hope
Just panic
Fear to live

Taking the knife
Smiling

No more fear
No more panic

A cut
Blood
Still smiling

Empty thoughts
Happiness

Sweet sweet suicide
Beautiful death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lycko Chizo 02 August 2009

Wow well write fine piece. It reminded me of my poem 'Shattered' you must read it. I think you mispelled the word hapiness kindly edit it however your poem is good so I'll give it a 10+!

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Dislocated Heart 07 February 2009

wow.... interesting poem..

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samar Halabi 09 January 2009

wonderful poem I like it so much thanks for sharing +++10 it was a really sweet suicide Syrian........

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