Hey Bruce, Wait Up! Poem by Elisabeth Wingle

Hey Bruce, Wait Up!



I can see him waiting for me at the gate
He is opening it for me
He is wearing jeans and a bright white athletic T -shirt
He is barefoot
His hair is sticking out on both sides of his face
(like Jack Nicholson in the Shinning)
He is walking quickly ahead of me
He keeps looking back, to see if I am behind him
He motions to me with his hands,
Come on, come on, hurry up
I try to walk faster but he is still ahead of me
We are walking down a long carpeted hallway with lots of doors
Like a hotel hallway, the carpet is red
He stops in front of a door.
His hand is on the door knob, it opens,
His other hand is beckoning me,
I peek, the room is large,
There seems to be a party going on
Then, I saw them, Mom and Dad
I look around the room
Everyone I know who is not anyone anymore is there
I wake to find the grief gnawing at the hole in my heart
And then I whisper
I'll meet you at the party, brother
Hey Bruce, wait up!

Hey Bruce, Wait Up!
Saturday, March 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,grief ,heaven,love,afterlife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 20 July 2016

beckoning. ;) i've never been beconed, have you? ok, i was going to make another suggestion, BUT i see this is a very serious poem, so i won't. have a nice reunion, Lisa. bri :)

0 0 Reply
Elisabeth Wingle 21 July 2016

Bri, Tell me what else I needs to be edited. I've already shown you what a terrible speller I am.

0 0
Wes Vogler 22 March 2016

Intriguing! Who is Bruce (Dern?) I like the term PROSE POEM You have a compelling form of writing. Me who does not approve of non-rhyming poetry I am unable to rate it except I like it

0 0 Reply
Elisabeth Wingle 22 March 2016

Hi Wes, I am glad you liked this! It's based on a dream I had Bruce was my oldest brother he died of cancer 2 1/2 years ago I miss him terribly. He was a great guy,13 years older than I. He was not just a brother but a friend.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success