MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [36 Words Poetry] ~

Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
8 March 2013

[Memo on: World Woman's Day]

Delicate
Membrane
Hymen
Hi men
Rupture
Torture
Make
It
Rot
Raw
Rendezvous
Of
Libido
Why?

=) -

Its
Psychic
Somatic
Aeonian
Bruise
Blast.

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Vicariously
Suffers
Mother
Mary.

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Forget
Why
Its
Omni
Mother
((^))
Spot
That
Delivered
All
Flora
Fauna
Univers e? !


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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 8, 2013
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 20, 2013

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Comments about ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [36 Words Poetry] ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Roseann Shawiak (6/7/2016 4:25:00 PM)

    Reality in a poetical form is excellent, it reaches and touches more people that way! Rapists need to know that what they do is inhumane and will not be tolerated by anyone ever again. Your poem is a step in the right direction, helping others to find the courage to follow your example. Thank you for sharing and bravery! RoseAnn

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  • Sahara Adhikari (6/15/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    gudddd.. it would b great if u would read mine as well nd drop some comments

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  • Sahara Adhikari (6/15/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    gudddd.. it would b great if u would read mine as well nd drop some comments

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (6/2/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    Niv, nice to read your poem after a pretty long time.It is a fantastic expression of reality in a crisp form. Let me read once more and add a few lines. But on my first glance ten out of ten.

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/30/2013 11:43:00 AM)

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    From: Sally Plumb Plumb
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 5/28/2013 6: 14: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    Attacks on women seem to be worldwide. It is a very bad situation.
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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (5/8/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Word and theme are equally well in highest degree.

    That
    Delivered
    All
    Flora
    Fauna
    Universe? ! are in apogee of highest order.

    What level poet ascended tagging female part as Universal Deliverer...fantastic concept in coherence with Indian scriptural concept of Genesis [it totally differs with Christian Genesis]

    Thanks for standing like Gibraltar Rock untiringly against the menace BRAVO please keep it up. Regards 10++ if registers

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  • Onalethuso Petruss Buyile NtemaOnalethuso Petruss Buyile Ntema (5/3/2013 12:47:00 AM)

    classic thought of how words been painted to paint a picture of the true realness of the complexities of the world; domestic and gender based abuses and violence against women and children, negligence/ parental incompetence and hopelessness have invaded the face of mother earth. good piece of writing Nivedita.

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/1/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    From: Robert Cheruiyot
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 4/19/2013 7: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: Hymen ~ Hi Men [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    Hi honorable poet. I just got a chance to go over your poem. Very good write, message delivered. Couldn't help crying especially when you write, 'the spot that delivered fauna and flora of the universe'. You painted a picture that will never be deleted in the minds of the men of this world. You've put on a Good fight and here I repent on behalf of all men.
    And Niv, are you on facebook. I would also like to meet you there. What do you think?
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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/1/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    From: Robert Cheruiyot
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 4/19/2013 7: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: Hymen ~ Hi Men [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    Hi honorable poet. I just got a chance to go over your poem. Very good write, message delivered. Couldn't help crying especially when you write, 'the spot that delivered fauna and flora of the universe'. You painted a picture that will never be deleted in the minds of the men of this world. You've put on a Good fight and here I repent on behalf of all men.
    And Niv, are you on facebook. I would also like to meet you there. What do you think?
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    Posted thru kindness of AB London

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/1/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    From: Robert Cheruiyot
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 4/19/2013 7: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: Hymen ~ Hi Men [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    Hi honorable poet. I just got a chance to go over your poem. Very good write, message delivered. Couldn't help crying especially when you write, 'the spot that delivered fauna and flora of the universe'. You painted a picture that will never be deleted in the minds of the men of this world. You've put on a Good fight and here I repent on behalf of all men.
    And Niv, are you on facebook. I would also like to meet you there. What do you think?
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    Posted thru kindness of AB London

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/1/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    Dear Nivedita

    I was thrilled to read your message and poems. I have been writing on women’s issues, women empowerment and human rights of the 'ignored and downtrodden'.

    You have a real fire in your heart, which inspires me.

    Right now I am writing a book of poetry on the ghastly rape of women (especially the rape of infants and girl children) . This issue has to be highlighted non-stop 24x7 until the mindset of our people changes....

    I think you are the right person to help me and collaborate with me in this work.

    Regards and best of luck in your endeavor! !

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (4/28/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    Dear Niv, thanks for invitation, i am really shocked at the way humanity loses to bloom being slowly wrest and shattered by insanity, and sacred spirit of sex is lost completely into canibalistic spirit of lust, and impulsive force of obsession impales upon sacred institution unison, anyway, poem of yours is a time tuned alert to society to arrest such hypochondriacal social malady, thanks for sharing

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  • Kevin PatrickKevin Patrick (4/28/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    I find the subject elusive yet also alluring, your style is distinctive and dark, natures femanine qualities are almost always subverted by masculine diversions. I also find this funny although I probably should not. Thank you for sharing

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  • Niken Kusuma WardaniNiken Kusuma Wardani (4/26/2013 11:17:00 PM)

    it's a lovely-up-to-date-poem, not saying much like an essay but pointing to the essence smartly, simple yet mpressive thought to present. thanks for sharing

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  • Amitabha Bagchi (4/26/2013 12:30:00 PM)

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    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann
    Date-Time: 4/25/2013 3: 22: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    From: Teddy Opundo
    To: Nivedita[poet under threat of editorial Cann
    Date-Time: 4/24/2013 12: 14: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Well comprehension
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    Dear poet,
    I've read your poem along others and i can say they are good more so the one you specified on, it is well focused and comprehendable.Thanks alot.
    Ted.
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  • Amitabha Bagchi (4/26/2013 12:27:00 PM)

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    From: Rajendran Muthiah
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann
    Date-Time: 4/25/2013 10: 33: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Re: ~ Hi Men ~ Hymen ~ Amen [33 words poetry] ~ niv ~ UK
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    Dear Nivedita, You are a daring poet. Our people were disciplined before the arrival of the Muslim invaders. The rape and loot of the womenfolk and wealth after a war was introduced in the north of our country by the by the invaders from the Central Asian nations. Our people have inherited that culture from them and still in free India, we see the remnants of that culture.I must have a dictionary beside me while reading your poems because you are the only one using such special diction in poetry. Anyhow, I read your poems at leisure and say my comments frankly. Thanks a lot.

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  • Prateep Sengupta (4/26/2013 12:24:00 AM)

    Your poem is perhaps one of the best literary expressions against atrocities on women which has become rampant on a global scale. It echos the mood of protest and disgust of all the right thinking people. Today because of electronic media we know the news and sympathize with the victims, and join in protest against such brutality. But I feel for those unsung females whose sufferings went unreported or still remain unreported. In fact if you introspect deeply you will find that humanity has not even advanced a step from primitivism. You have earlier written about mass rape of women in wars and in civil wars. Always it is the women who are at the receiving ends. I sadly remember those thousands of women during the liberation war of Bangladesh in 1971 who suffered for loving their mother tongue. What is most ironical is the fact that countries like USA, UK, France and China - that constitute world powers - did not even condemn the atrocities for political reasons. I wish you were writing during 1971, atleast there would have been some poetic protest and mourning over the fate of those unfortunate females who suffered at the hands of brutal Pakistani army.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/25/2013 1:47:00 AM)

    oh niv all madness
    still smile on faces
    where will we stop?
    is there any...............10 i cried while reading..... lovely poem

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (4/25/2013 12:59:00 AM)

    Here each word cuts and ruptures! ! Very powerful write! Congrats! !

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (4/25/2013 12:10:00 AM)

    Whenever i read your poem, i find each word is delighted with a powerful inner meaning and each word can be elaborated to get the facts of the poem. you are strong and powerful as usual. thnx for sharing.

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