Hidden Smoke Is A Friend Indeed Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Hidden Smoke Is A Friend Indeed

Rating: 5.0


'If they pick I have some words for a country sad song.
Yes, If they sing I hear quietly.'
A rising smoke from a cottage chimney whispers to the barren sky.
'They burn the happiness and it turns into smoke.
Where do I go nobody knows?
But don't be frightened
I never pollute the sky and I promise you to bring rain for your crops to smile
And feed you in a severe drought.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 12 July 2009

This is excellent Nimal. Your word pictures are always arresting, but this one is like the icing on the poetic cake. Such a joy to read your lyrical words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 06 July 2009

This is simply beautiful. A poem painting worthy of the name. 10/10 for your amazing gifted work. Warmest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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