Homo Machina

knowing no empathy
no mercy
they have only coldness
a brief of finality
- - - - - - - - - - - -
they are the future of our future
and we are them
and we, our death
- - - - The reckless development of humanoids would only spell doom for man.A great poem of the Day, Congratulations Clive Culverhouse.(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/4/2020 2:13:00 AM)

thanks for reading, , , .,

no, tones will pale into all skins
corridor lengths of emptiness
seen within computed eyes
and nothing the machines do
can hold a grace in our hands a wonderful poem. futuristic, tony(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 3:57:00 PM)

Thanks for your time and comment on Machina.,

A bit chilling, but fascinating reading. Congrats on poem of the day!(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 1:33:00 PM)

thanks for reading Machina and taking the time to comment, much appreciated

no metal can truly see art steel ignorance of telling brush strokeknowing no empathy no mercy they have only coldness a brief of finality. A warning for the human society. Congratulations(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 9:16:00 AM)

A warning indeed,
thanks for your time

Intriguing poem with dire futuristic message I hope we heed...(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 9:14:00 AM)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Harley, much appreciated

Very imaginative, dystopian poem...congratulations Clive!(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 4:58:00 AM)

Thanks for reading, Dominic, and taking the time to comment, ..,

It's like training someone too do your job the getting sacked, too smart for our won good! How in have we taught machines too think? Great poem quite evokative(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 4:19:00 AM)

Quite!
Last line .. and we, our death

thanks for taking time to comment, much appreciated

Indeed, machines, though they may be the ones that would survive, will only be machines, incapable of great works of art that humans can produce. Congratulations on being poet of the day!(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 3:17:00 AM)

thanks for taking the time to comment Jasbir,

superb thoughtful poem penned; congrats for being selected as POD

Metallic justice
cannot see the true art

Robotic workforce
can do anything
but without any feelings

no mercy there
no empathy there
machine is machine though it's fair(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 2:30:00 AM)

Our exchange of poetic expression,
thanks for your time dear poet, ..

No machine can truly see art! ! ! !
Smart art of life.


Thanks for sharing this poem with us.(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(5/3/2020 2:28:00 AM)

True, thanks for commenting Edward, .

SORRY
U MEANT MANLY(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(4/20/2020 3:06:00 AM)

all comments welcome even the funny ones; }

LOVELY POEM POETESS
what evolution takes from our touch
these once bountiful gardens
once Eden
once Paradise
the flowers, such colour is lost

EVOLUTION NEEDS a variety of CORONAS(Report)Reply

Clive Culverhouse(4/20/2020 3:23:00 AM)

we're in an evolutionary step brought on by the coronavirus that is

Clive Culverhouse(4/20/2020 3:01:00 AM)

Great comment, you are incredibly perceptive, we probably are in the middle of a microscopic evolutionary step, huge thanks for giving me that thought and for taking the time to comment.,