Hints Of Taste. Poem by Fay Slimm

Hints Of Taste.

Rating: 5.0


A hint of warm fruit in whispered word
Lasts me all summer long. - Songs
Of romance in verse heat me like fire.
At the sound of your name flames
Alight me with sharp acid blaze.- Hint
Me toward kisses you recently left
On my so eager mouth, as when
In sweet dreams you appeared.
I then saw the first lines of our love
In your gold-dusted verse. -Thus light
Every dusk, and shadow me
Throughout all my sleep.- Oh hint
Me a message tonight, and fly
With a taste of encore.- Make haste.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 April 2009

Stunning prose Fay simply stunning....thank you...Fi 10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 04 April 2009

Sort of fringes on the spices of love.

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Tsira Goge 04 April 2009

Fay, Beautiful and an impressive hint...10... Tsira

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Catrina Heart 04 April 2009

A hint of warm fruit in whispered word Lasts me all summer long. - Songs ------- lovely lines...Fay! You have created a beautiful and stunning composition here with fine rhymes and rhythm, and so nice poetic language used........10

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Fay, listen.. listen closely Our heart are beating... The same beat... thump... thump.... how you knew? ? ? welcome back!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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