Hold Me Closer Poem by Peter S. Quinn

Hold Me Closer

Rating: 5.0


Hold me closer
my feelings are lonely,
I once was a lover
now I am here only;
feelings do go away
into the night and dark,
loneliness will meet a new day
in its morning embark.

Yesterday I had all
with my youthful heart
now there seems to be a fall
in its moment's start
give me something to hold on
life is always walking
dreams of youth might be gone
but my heart's still talking

Hold me to my dreams
like a river, they are going
life has wandered in its deems
without me ever knowing
Hold me closer
my feelings are lonely,
I once was a lover
now I am here only

Oh like a river
everything moves away
but love can still deliver
and meet its coming day
you and I are lonely now
but shall we meet again
dreams inside somehow
never completely will fain

Sunday, May 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: love,feelings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hold me closer is about love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 16 May 2022

I see your love freely flowing like a river. Full *****

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Nabakishore Dash 16 May 2022

Emotion packed excellent poem dear poet Peter.Top scores.

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Love makes life bright…."hold me to my dreams "… lovely poem… 5 *

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Such a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Varsha M 16 May 2022

beautiful heartfelt composition. Indeed the emotions speaks a lot.

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