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Hold On To Me

Rating: 2.7
One day we made a promise to each other,
A promise to always stay together...
Now is the time to fulfil it true
Hold on to me, I'll always be with you....

Love cannot always be a smooth ride
We always have to be at each other's side...
This is the time when we can prove our love
Fight difficulties, face odds and rise above....
I know the time is tough, parents don't agree
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Indira Babbellapati 17 July 2010
hmmm...that's a poetic assurance!
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Preetam Shetty 16 July 2010
Trust me I am not flattering you.....but I salute you for your work.......wondrous way you have expressed love
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Stefanie Fontker 13 July 2010
Love is a battle, one you have fought well and will continue to fight. Bravo, another gold medal.
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Mega Sim 13 July 2010
There is a lot of power in a hug and a lot of heart felt emotion in this poem. I can feel the warmth and conviction in a hug so strong that it will never let go. Keep holding on...and keep writing your beautiful poems.
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Joseph Poewhit 12 July 2010
It only takes two to dance
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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2010
wowwwww a really sweet poem I like that, where you said about parents understanding. You really poured out your heart so sweetly.--very touching I liked it. Makes great read.
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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 July 2010
I had opposition when I was young. I've never forgotten it.
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Gan Chennai 10 July 2010
You poem has lot of relevance now, with Honour Killing a common occurrence now-a-days.
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Anita Trivedi 08 July 2010
You know this poem is one of your best creation. Vert well crafted poem................. Really very great job.........10+++
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Unwritten Soul 07 July 2010
It is red and blue..different but true... Rohit you hit me one more time! ..'sorry britney i borrow your line' hahahaha...as usual it is very well written... Sometimes parent can't be agreed with our own decision but hurt them is wrong too... That why this poem is so special, u still in love but at same time respect your parents, that is a good role for any young teen here...: D well done, nice and so original, but how did u can write a poem like this in your birthday? i thought u will bring some other theme...: D
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