The dawn drinks
the darkness
until tipsy
with light
it staggers
all over the place
knocking birds
off of branches
so that they fall
into flight
and even
artificial ponds
at the back of
suburban gardens
mirror
how beautiful
the time has become
as we hold hands
even in sleep.
I just love the angle you come in on things and how the world is seen by you...the trajectory of your mind and the acute(cute) observation of the world at large and the incredible detail. The last line is so touching and tender. You amaze my senses with you see and how you see it and...the way you say it. I love it. love Dee Dee
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your vision of love is, as always, near perfection!