Holiday Poem by Isabella Campos

Holiday

Rating: 5.0


Oh, tears!
Oh, tears!
Wash me away
From the city's dirt
From the gloomy word:
No rest, just breaks
Just breaks, no play
Oh, tears!
Oh, tears!
Drawn me in salt
Close my eyes
Let me keep
The sea in a dream

c I.C2016

Friday, October 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,reflections
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Renu Kakkar 29 October 2016

I liked this simple poem of wanting to be one with nature.

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Sheryl Deane 16 October 2016

The poem is fresh with meaning

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Isabella Campos 14 October 2016

Thanks for the comments below. Don't know how to reply yet 1: 1. This poem is quite simple and drawn is not a typo by the way! Today, it's not my day for writing but I'm trying!

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Mj Lemon 14 October 2016

A very compelling insight into human nature. A wonderful poem, a 10.

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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2016

An insightful train of thought, nicely encapsulated in good poetic diction with conviction. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Isabella. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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