Holidays' Journey* Poem by elysabeth faslund

Imagery's paradigm on display here, indeed, Elysabeth...Pristine construction... Well crafted, all around, young lady! FjR

Liz..., I gave it a ten, but it's way over my head....! ! ! Best, T.M.. PS, are you sure the PROFANE PUSSY didn't write this.....? ? ? ?

Superb imagery. I like your frosty window. Beautiful write, elysabeth Love, Sandra

For me really mixes a lot of the activities reviewed with the seasons with just one word here and there to allude to them and your title sums it up beautifully as a journey culminating in the winter holidays.

A delight to read with all the sounds coming to life as if they are real.

This work tends to give me a sense of Peace and AdVenTure as I follow you through this Tremendous forest of Imagery! I love it Elysabeth because Nature is so soothing to me...Great Job! You have such a way with words........may many blessings come your way! Thank U 4 sharing....... =Shelley=

I like the way this work tends to compresses on you while you read it in the middle ok maybe only I understand what I’m talking about but that’s what makes it a good poem to me.

A truly fresh and exciting rhythmic approach. The rhymes, near rhymes and repetitions are immediate rather than line ending creating a very original and tightly structured sound world. I felt I was being taken on a very brisk walk in a natural setting.

Love the alliteration in this piece. An evocative, original series of pictures of the journey from one season to another. You have great skill Elyzabeth and a love of words which flow effortlessly from your wild and woolly pen. A pleasing poem. love, Allie xxxx