Hollow Poem by M.J. Lemon

Hollow

Rating: 5.0

Building without foundation
courts ruination
action without rumination
saps elation
a wall and window
stand erect hollow
but what do i know
thinking winds blow
doors and floors
hit me to the core
I'll never leave this place

Anything life throws at
me I can face
believing
thinking
clinging
to you and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 06 December 2025

Brilliant and significant piece.... thanks for sharing...

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M.J. Lemon 16 December 2025

Many thanks, Anjandev. The fact this poem resonated means a great deal.

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M.J. Lemon 23 January 2026

Thank you so much. THanks for reading, Anjandev.

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Laquory Jones 30 November 2025

That is a great poem M.J. Lemon. Keep up the great work

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Isadora Quagmire 26 February 2026

Excellent write! ! ! When all fails, true love shall not.

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Rob Lamberton 26 February 2026

Rather "hollow" … but not really as there is something deep which we would " hallow." In my other comment I misspelled the title. But maybe because the poem is not hollow at all!

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Rob Lamberton 26 February 2026

For a poem titled "hallow" there seems to be much in the heart of of this poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 February 2026

A very inspiring and meaningful poem. Life's hardships can be conquered with because of the 'you' in our life. Wonderful poem, M.J.

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Kim Barney 21 December 2025

Loved the line: Anything life throws at me I can face.

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M.J. Lemon 30 December 2025

Very much appreciated! Thanks, Kim.

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