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Rating: 4.9

no one leaves home unless
home is the mouth of a shark
you only run for the border
when you see the whole city running as well
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Warsan Shire
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 16 November 2022

if anyone knows that what he has become then it's sure that he knows all; something introspective note I feel; nice to read

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Pasin Taeem 16 November 2022

I like this poem, its theme and imagery. Some changes would improve its presentation: (a) replace ‘in an airport toilets' with ‘in an airport toilet'; (b) replace ‘means something more than journey' with ‘mean something more than journey' and (c) replace ‘be hunger' with ‘hunger'.

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A terrible account of refugees forced out of their homeland

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Reich Junker 11 May 2019

Home is supposed to be a place where everyone feels safe, secure, and loved. There are just circumstances that force people to leave their homes. This world needs healing and mending.

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Prabir Gayen 24 February 2019

no one leaves home until home is a sweaty voice in your ear saying- leave, run away from me now i dont know what i've become but i know that anywhere is safer than here...beautiful poem

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Bill McConnell 05 November 2018

How can anyone read this and say they like it, it's sad period and I don't like it not one bit

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keely 23 July 2021

reality is hard sometimes. this poem makes the situation visceral. that is its beauty.

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irene george(Tanzania) 29 October 2018

Warsan i really love your poems they teach nice

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ooooooooooooooof 18 September 2018

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Martha Loewenthal 01 July 2018

Interesting and deep

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Ryan Lee 19 June 2018

U.S. Secretary of Homeland Security Kirstjen Nielsen just turned 46. I wonder if she has children of her own and has ever lost sight of them - even for only a moment - in a crowd. She would do well to recall this panic. Perhaps she could even read this poem. I trust neither will happen.

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M’Lin 18 June 2018

Beautiful, and terrifying.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 09 June 2018

Wonderful artwork.... It's relavant in context...It has so much emotions

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Jon Chesterson 15 June 2017

Very fine and meaningful poem for our times. Times must be said. And of the collaborator too - Pig in the Marmalade.

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