Home Visit Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Home Visit

Rating: 5.0


We went out shopping for sales.
We drove out to eat..
One at a time clipped your nails...
Then rubbed lotion on your feet....
Lying on pillows in the bed.....
Of thoughts filled in our head......
Washed clean souls just right.......
We dreamed through the night........
With first light morning it did bring.........
I brought you a special new ring..........
With diamonds topped blue hearted...........
Respectful fair well to the departed............
Your visit was if just had started.............
Our love tuned with a string..............
As we sat and watched for your train...............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlet Romantika 13 February 2009

Long distance romances are incredibly hard. Such a romantic piece very well written.

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