Day Dreamer Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Day Dreamer

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I'v offten sat and dreamed,
What it would be like to be
That bird flying in the clouds
High in the jewl blue sky above us.
Dreamed what it would be like to be
That rabbit sitting calmly
Grazeing on the clovers
Dashing through his maze
Of holes underground.
Dreamed what it would be like to be
That squirrel leaping from the trees
Their leavs combing my fur.
Dreamed what it would be like to be
That turtle swimming in the wild seas
Glideing on their currents.
In all these dreams I'v roam
Now I dream what it would be like
To have a family and a home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(: God's Wild Child :) 08 July 2008

i like it, good job. keep it up. =)

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Serenity Prayer 08 July 2008

those last two lines just break my heart. great job though.

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hmm i wonder what it would be like to have a family and a home also, good job

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Rani Turton 09 July 2008

I liked this poem a lot, the finals lines are really very touching. Thanks.

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DELETED NOW 11 July 2008

thanks for sharing I wonder that sometimes too

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 20 November 2017

Thanks with such dreams. I hope that you soon have a family and home. Great artwork.

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

Now I dream what it would be like To have a family and a home. ya me too. this is a really great poem. I really like it. great job. Purkey Girl

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Michael Gale 10 December 2008

Great poem! I heard that squirrels are nutz. Is that true? Nyuk! Nyuk! Nyuk! Coiytenly. God bless all poets-MJG.

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premji premji 04 December 2008

dream dream and dreammm squeze poetry out...

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Patricia Gale 26 November 2008

Home, family and love... wonderful dreams. Lovely sentiments.

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