Honest Opinion Poem by Martin Baraka

Honest Opinion

Rating: 4.0


Love has many definitions
enough to fill a counterbook
others compaire and contrast
while others add and subtract
some will say its a contract
some a commitment

but as long as you give me your consent
my heart will be content
my life and yours to blend
to be together to the end
let us not follow the trend
but let us set the trend

to reach the moon aim the sun
so i will aim you as you are the sun
have a nice day my lovely one

Friday, December 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

A great love poem. The Sun and moon reminded me a saying, Not failure, low aim is crime. Enjoyed the wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan 04 December 2015

very nice I like this..as long as you understand each other that would be great

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