Hooked On Wisdom Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Hooked On Wisdom

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'It's all set to test you'
says the fisherman
who looked at me
with a half mocked smile
and a devilish twinkle
in his eye
as he fished
where motorboats
sped by
scaring away the fish!

Friday, October 1, 2004
Topic(s) of this poem: fish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Thompson 21 June 2005

very good, keep it short, nice hook

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