Hopeless Poem by Mpheng Magome

Hopeless

Rating: 5.0


I am what remains of my former self.
Ashes.
A skeleton, a shadow, a memory
Of who I once was
Standing in the void,
With no way to turn back.
And nowhere to move forward.
All I can do is fall down and weep.
My perfect little girl is dead.

Tuesday, July 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: ashes,hopeless,memory,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

It would be wrong to comment in any way other than to send you deepest sympathy & prayers: but the fact that your writing moves these feelings shows how well you write too.

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