N- - - Poem by Mpheng Magome

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Rating: 4.3


There's nothing as sweet as the smell of your sweat
So elusive as the dance that we haven't done yet
Your hand on my waist
My head on your chest
It's heaven, babe.
My sin.
My soul.
My love.

Nothing in this realm is forbidden,
Stuck in my mind, he's amazing
His beautiful smile's excruciating
And I can't stop.

Nothing in this realm is forbidden,
This beautiful world I'm creating
But it all still feels excruciating
I want to stop.

My mind seems stuck on the way that he moves
He's under my skin, like a stab wound
Those rich, brown eyes can be so cruel.
It's torture, babe.
My sin.
My soul.
The tip of tongue taking three steps down.
My sin.
My soul,
My love.

Nothing in this land is forbidden,
Stuck in my mind, he's amazing
His beautiful smile's excruciating
And I can't stop.

Nothing in this land is forbidden,
This beautiful world I'm creating
But it all still feels excruciating
I want to stop.

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 07 November 2015

'Nothing in this realm is forbidden, Stuck in my mind, he's amazing His beautiful smile's excruciating And I can't stop. Nothing in this realm is forbidden, This beautiful world I'm creating But it all still feels excruciating I want to stop.' Altgough not a big fan repetition, I liked how you used these stanzas to fit in your poem, which is really, really good... Thank you for sharing :)

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Mpheng Magome 12 November 2015

I actually originally wrote it as a song and I forgot to edit before I posted it here, thank you for liking it anyway.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Wonderful expression of love poem shared here really. Very interesting sharing.10

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