Dean Meredith

Hopeless - Poem by Dean Meredith

The desperate midnight clawings
Laid me wasted, blue and black
The constant sand-paper gnawings
Exposing me bare, unclad, off track

I wanted her, she wanted me
For a time, it all came blowing back
Under her shade, it couldn't be
All that I was, and all that I lack

Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss

Comments about Hopeless by Dean Meredith

  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (6/23/2017 11:45:00 PM)

    A touching poem.... Rated 10++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, EACH PASSING DAY, TAKE TIME TO THINK, and BECAUSE I LOVE HER..Thanks, Dean👍 (Report)Reply

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  • Samuel Segun ToluwalaseSamuel Segun Toluwalase (6/23/2017 10:06:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem Dean. I really love it. Thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Paul WarrenPaul Warren (6/23/2017 9:59:00 AM)

    Always a difficult subject well done. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 23, 2017

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