Hopscotch Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Hopscotch

Rating: 5.0


Maya*, do you remember our boisterous childhood?
We were hopping over the marked squares.
At last you hopped over the horizon
leaving me alone in my dormitory.
I stuck in my room with the pile of books.
The gust rattled my tiny windows
and I am scared that my fragile heart will scatter
and blow away like a withered leaf.
I am already frustrated in the rat race
and this raw deal never allow me to jump
over the hurdle.

Thursday, June 15, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: books,childhood,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 June 2006

So many fragile lives blown away without rhyme or reason. A moment of silence is all we have left to give them. And, of course, your poem of love and remembrance which is an enduring gift. Wonderful, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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John Tiong Chunghoo 15 June 2006

sweet little poem. there are hackyened parts but are saved by some clever twists.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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