How Can I Tell Her? Poem by Doom & Gloom

Hi D&G, That is very nice flows so well, may you never become unhinged! All the best David

Hello Doom and Gloom You are not alone my friend.

I wrote one called, 'why do i love u' but i like this one better for so deeply conveying a sentiment.

Excellent poem, very very good. I understand how you feel, though due to recent events all my hopes have been torn apart. But again, good poem.

Well, a good beginning might be to just TELL HER...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

An impressive write mr/mrs doom and gloom, another great write, well done..

Very nice. You have a nice way with words.

This poem is beautiful It is almost like a song

What a great poem. I have a friend named Neil, and I love him a lot. I thought it'd be fun to see'f someone had the same name was him. Looks like someone does! Great poem, man. My advice? Just tell her how you feel, and be direct about it. No more messin' around. I love my Brian as well, just tell her how you feel. I'll tell Brian, (Neil) as well.: O) God Bless, and keep writing! !

This is my favorite poem......i also wondered how can i tell her? it so aptly true... how do u choose the words..when u tell her.......words are not enough....n will she undestand....i think my life is all about this how can i tell her.... Excellent poetry my friend....great work...