Humans (One At A Time) Comments
Where one fight isn’t enough
It leads to decades of hell
We cross contentious lines
Laid down by somebody else
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The opening felt weak however as the song/poem progressed the energy and imagery became more powerful as it went along. Although the message is direct I guess that doesn't mean the presentation does ;) Force-fed ways to defy The sanctity of a marriage And demean the meaning of love That line right there^ Masterpiece.
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12/16/2025 12:52:43 PM # 1.0.0
Amazingly captivating, I´d love to know what you felt when you were writing this, though I can make a pretty close guess. All I can really say is that you should totally make an album ´cause this would make it an extreme #1 HIT!