Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,438 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Husband's Exit - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Widow comes in existence with husband's exit
Painful memories to last with shaky feet
Whole life is in dark with no solution in sight
Life becomes burden and nothing goes right

Woman has some satisfaction if husband has gone away
He may return one day even if found another way
Widow is strictly not called with his exit from life
She stands legally as his estranged wife

Widower stage to felt if something is committed in excess
If husband is beating daily and provides no access
Sexual harassment followed by cruel treatment
Husband is buried alive in mind with resentment

It is living hell for woman to accept status of widow
No option is left for her to think of another window
It is dark future and unbelievable forecast for tomorrow
Nothing to think of world but keep quiet and lie low

Woman has tolerance power and world has acknowledged
She has come out of dark and at least without him managed
No one has dared to defy his womanhood for simple reason
That she is symbol of courage and well understood person

If men ever thinks that women can be played around
And desert them at will to be no where found
It is grave mistake and to be taken into count
Without woman it is almost difficult to mount

If woman is encouraged to show some guts
She may prove exceptionally talented figure, but
She has to be equally respected for her weak character
Now at least time has changed for her to show as formidable character


Comments about Husband's Exit by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2012 3:11:00 PM)


    Rizvana Parveen
    Good composition.A realistic picture of a widow and her plight in today's society.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2012 3:10:00 PM)


    Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta! 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2012 3:08:00 PM)


    Dear Hasmukh Bhai,

    You have shown the plight of a widow
    Who is like a cow without a meadow
    You have shown your deep sympathy
    And expressed your heartfelt empathy


    K.H. Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Apr 09,2012
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2012 12:07:00 AM)


    Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2012 7:30:00 PM)


    Re: Husband's exit (Score: 1)
    by Zbird on Sunday, April 08,2012 (18: 43: 21)
    you always find strength in women and I am sure women find strength in your poems.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2012 7:29:00 PM)


    Cyn BuhainBaello
    A very timely poem about the metamorphosis of the modern woman, and the new definition of a widow. A husband's exit out of a woman's life does not spell its end, for some, like me - it meant a relief and release and made a new woman out of me. Thank you for writing this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2012 9:48:00 AM)


    Widow comes in existence with husband’s exit
    Painful memories to last with shaky feet
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 8, 2012



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