Husband's Hurdle Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Husband's Hurdle

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His wife complained to one of his friends.
'Please advise him as he is not strong like young days.
very feeble, doctor said that he is having hyperglycaemia,
hypertension, hyperventilation and et cetera.
fortunately he doesn't catch aids,
but still I have doubts of his negligence and neighbourliness.
I am scared of the 'hydrogen bomb'
who lives in a proximate house
one day there will be an explosion?

to my poet friend Duncan.Wyllie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 02 September 2006

What an amazing poem! It would seem that these two people are living rather dangerously. I hope that they both survive the experience..Very original thinking, Nimal. Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 September 2006

CANNOT THINK OF ANY PERSON ON THIS SITE MORE WORTHY OF A DEDICATIONAL POEM, THAN MY CLASS ACT FRIEND & SUPPORTER OF ME & OF ALL THAT IS PURE ABOUT PH...DUNCAN WYLLIE...NOT SURE AS TO THE CONTEXT OF THE WORK, BUT THAT IS NOT FOR ME TO CONJURE....NICE POEM....BEAUTIFUL GESTURE, NIMAL''''''''''''''FJR

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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