Hymns Of October Night Rains Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Hymns Of October Night Rains

Rating: 5.0

October night rains
chattering in the trees,
the chill breeze
murmuring his prayers,
the owl in the fig tree
bleeding hymns,
sparrows and parakeets
having surrendered
themselves to sleep,

rains' sobs
reduced itself
to whimpers,
souls whine in the wild,

Life relegated to
borders of consciousness,
the voluptuous river
runs into the sands
of the eternal fire,

I cease to be innocent.

'The wages of sin is death'
and I die, my dumb heart.

Hymns Of October Night Rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 05 October 2024

So much depth and beauty! Stunning imagery and the ending is a surprise for the reader. A wonderful read! Nature and emotions are juxtaposed so artfully.

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Alyx True Edge 02 October 2024

and then, love failed in October and the mournful moods reappear to reap the last sparks of joy, intense inner landscapes.5/5

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Thank you Alyx. I am very happy that you could follow the poem and it's mood.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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