I Am A Deserted Poem by Neela Nath Das

I Am A Deserted

Rating: 4.0


The night is deep
and I'm running my
fingers to express
me before night.
I'm a deserted soul,
devoid of love
and affection
rushing without
any goal.
I take the stress
of making my kins
happy and jolly.
But, alone I cry
concealing my pain
and show them that
I am very happy.

Sunday, November 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 17 November 2014

This is fantastic. Against all odds, you have managed to keep the young ones insulated. Their happiness gives you the reason to be happy and forget the past which was full of pain and anguish. Thanks for this poem which ends on an optimistic note.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 November 2014

I take the stress of making my kins happy and jolly. But, alone I cry concealing my pain and show them that I am very happy. A good poem of aching soul which forbears pain to please others.A poem of pain and pleasure.it took my heart. Col Muhammad Khalid khan

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 November 2014

The night is deep and I am running my fingers over words of expression. Nice observation and suitable poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

I take the stress of making my kins happy and jolly. But, alone I cry concealing my pain and show them that I am very happy. so nice poem

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Chuy Amante 02 November 2014

Let me play with your poem Sister Neela: I am a dessert from which many come to have and never-ending supply of love and goodness LOVE, the real deal, served on a plate of kindness with the fork of benevolence sprinkled with joy Come one and all to the love kitchen of Sister Neela! The love you share is god's love, gobble up lots yourself pure soul you ARE LOVE

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