I am a girl
with all feminine worries
complaints and objection to all
just for nothing
but have something to concern
sometimes great joy
sometime intense grief
Jealous; a woe of my mind
but patience and kindness are my merits
Growing by age, I am
the reason for my father's worry
makes my mother responsible
so that I should copy her qualities
my brothers, my shelter
I am always depend on them.
Being my bodyguards of my life
they got villian image among boys!
In a society, I am a pride
to God, a sincere believer
politely gives my prayers and offers
worship Him with whole heart
adore before His glory and power
Being a girl, merrily sings
sings my songs from the heart
praise the nature's scenic beauty
makes some fun with birds!
always keep my mind artistic
let me sing my elegy too
when I am sad and helpless
as a lonesome child in a dense wood!
hope for love and care
Yes, because I am a girl!
good lines and rhythm, Sajna....and a good original mind close to nature and its beauties: praise the nature's scenic beauty makes some fun with birds! always keep my mind artistic
I like this poem, , , , , , Being a girl we are the worry of our parents/\/\/\/Good poem, , , sajna........10****** Rose
a reality of a grown up girl in a middle class conservtive family, poetically painted beautifully. my daughter may too feel in the same way. keep it up
this one is very good poem..i really enjoyed it....keep it up
A nice poetic imagination, Sajna. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
i hope and pray, that your wishes for the future may be fulfilled in wholesome terms....... your femininity is expressed very well in your poem.... be devoted to God, pray well. be artistic. control the emotions and be a strong woman, a wife and a beloved mother later....... God bless you always.
An extraordinary attempt on an excellent thought and expressed in an exquisite way, thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is an excellent poem. I think yourfather doesn't need to worry. It is such pleasure to read this poem and it shows the true nature of someone who dares to stand up for great values. Very well done, girl.