Tuesday, July 24, 2012

I Am..... (Beat Of The Drum) Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am....
the beat of the drum
in the electric hot night.
i am the horn of the bull,
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Kevin Patrick 04 August 2012

Again powerful, a war cry if their was one, I can hear the music beating to this and my desire to raise my armswide. Great Mr Cockrell

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Kasia Fedyk 25 July 2012

Wonderful, amazing, incredible Eric you draw everything like a magnet with your expressions and when I reaqd this poem, I am! I love it so much.

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Kaila George 24 July 2012

You out do yourself ever time I came back and read your poems. love it.

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Dave Walker 24 July 2012

A fantastic poem, a really great write.

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, I, I, I...Its always 'bout you, you, you! lol! Excellent, empowering piece of verse...I like the format, without rhyme, as I think that would siphoned the tremendous poetic thunder that outpours from each & every line.. Good poetic acumen! ~FjR~

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