Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

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I Am Just A Sound Wave - Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

I felt it today
The detachment
from attachment
The connection
Between

Affliction and affection
Inspiration for perspiration
Emotional give and take
Where trust is never safe

I also am devoid of guilts
You gave some, I gave a lot
It's alright
something's in life
cannot be bought

We are all
recycled products
Many lifetimes
have etched out the hurts

I feel no happiness
Sadness has no place
My heart feels like
An alien landscape

This state of non feeling
Of being a non being
I must be anti matter
Or just a sound wave

Topic(s) of this poem: Sad


Comments about I Am Just A Sound Wave by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

  • Siddartha Montik (11/23/2016 3:56:00 AM)

    'Captivvating openiniing verse' - etched. by many lines (lives) , only to culminate in closing verses.....the strategy of non being. of being a non-beimg! something certainly sounds spiritual here! wonderful conception so gently. narrated. thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Terry Craddock (11/6/2016 1:56:00 AM)

    'We are all
    recycled products
    Many lifetimes
    have etched out the hurts

    I feel no happiness
    Sadness has no place
    My heart feels like
    An alien landscape'

    there is a huge richness, when gifted poets gigt simple lines; matter, anti matter, a sound wave, all beauty flows through the transiant states of your words :)
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  • Drtony Brahmin (8/28/2015 1:34:00 AM)

    This state of non feeling
    Of being a non being
    I must be anti matter
    Or just a sound wave about such a feeling i heard from a Budhhist Monsatry in Peking. non being..... a bit of religious philosophy thank you very much
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/18/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    We are all
    recycled products
    Truly said. Loved reading it.
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  • (9/8/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Good message Sadness has no a place A good poem and great writing. Liked it. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/1/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    Thank you Mr Somanathan Iyer for liking my poem. Thanks Donnie for reading and commenting. (Report)Reply

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  • Somanathan Iyer (9/1/2014 12:42:00 AM)

    Nice expressions, good write! (Report)Reply

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  • Donnie Wolff (8/31/2014 11:32:00 PM)

    Even ant matter, matters. I wrote a new poem, read it. They seem to fit. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 31, 2014



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