If I should say what you do stinks,
It does. Trust me!
It reeks with a doing...
That can be done much better.
Even if you attempted to improve,
The results will return to you benefits.
I'm not like the others,
Who will have you convinced...
A producing of mediocrity,
Has been accepted...
To meet 'their' expectations.
You invited my opinion! Remember that.
If my comments offend you,
Then you know where you can go...
To get your ego massaged.
I am not a masseur to B.S. or serve it.
You should acquire an appetite for honesty,
At this stage of your life.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Haha! Nicely done! I have to agree. Honesty is the best policy. If you don't really want to know.......then don't ask! Well done Lawrence!