I Am Not Yours

You love me, and I find you still
A spirit beautiful and bright,
Yet I am I, who long to be
Lost as a light is lost in light.
.../// beautiful loving expression; fantastic poem shared(Report)Reply

such a beautiful great feelings......greatly penned.......great 10++(Report)Reply

stupid all of it plain hurtful stupid a lot of grief for someone that i will never know or at least i dont think so(Report)Reply

lissiemariah_14(2/1/2019 9:50:00 AM)

how is it stupid bcuz thats not wat im understanding poetry is about how u feel inside and out its like all of ur feelings just poor out on a peice of paper and u letting them go...... so plz help me understand

well of course you deserve to be a free spirit how would i know that i left any impression not all that observant it never occured to me no one had ever really paid attenion / wonder why wow i was so wrong /i was going to ask help but who would believe that he was going to try to kill me /////it is all my fault(Report)Reply

dont finish my sentence yikes(Report)Reply

I am enamored by the captivating beauty of this love poem studded with exquisite expressions and is sweetly rhymed. Thanks. I quote:
Yet I am I, who long to be
Lost as a light is lost in light.(Report)Reply

Has such a nice rhythm and rhyme...and then you hit that final word. Haha. I hate when poets use similarly spelled words and think it's a substitute for similar-sounding words.(Report)Reply

AND I am going to add Sara to my favorite poets list.(Report)Reply

Wow! One of the best love poems ever. I'm not really a fan of love poems usually, but I may just add this one to my favorites list.(Report)Reply

Piece of great elegance, subtly penned in romantic diction to capture it's deep of insight and essence of the poem. A beautiful romantic and love poem indeed. Superb! Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.10/10(Report)Reply

Smooth, plain and fantastic flow of words. Love the stanzas! Just splendid!(Report)Reply

Incredibly beautiful. How wonderfully tender. Sara is truly one of the greatest spirits ever to have lived...(Report)Reply

A beautiful expression of love. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up. I was deeply moved.(Report)Reply

A beautiful expression of love: 'Long to be lost as a light is lost in light'. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up:(Report)Reply

A beautiful expression of love: 'Long to be lost as a light is lost in light'. Every line is superbly written. The last stanza is an intense sum up:
Oh plunge me deep in love- put out
My senses, leave me deaf and blind,
Swept by the tempest of your love,
A taper in a rushing wind.(Report)Reply

A passionate love willing to take the plunge in being loved
ST is as always a passionate woman.(Report)Reply

Nice thought with emotional love.(Report)Reply

Full of emotions and beautiful in every stanzas.
Superb write(Report)Reply

Mohammed Asim Nehal(7/7/2016 1:28:00 PM)

I agree...

Full of emotions and beautiful in every stanzas(Report)Reply

She is fantastic! C'est magnifiqué! !(Report)Reply