I Am Rude, I Am Sad, Poem by Liza Sud

I Am Rude, I Am Sad,

Rating: 5.0


I am rude, I am sad,
I am not nice, I’m bad,
I am beautiful – yes!
Beauty makes a regress.

I’m evil, I’m dark,
I’m despotic, maniac.
Don’t want it to be said
On The Judgment Dooms day.

If I had any sins –
God, from them my soul cleanse!
So that angels would say:
Grace, please don’t turn away!

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: redemption
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Moore 14 October 2015

Very Nice♥ Emotion and the human condition a struggle

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, all humans do mistake but who regret and repent and don't try to repeat are the virtuous like you My dear sister.........10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2015

We all make mistakes; so, you very beautiful with your mind. Wake up and move onece again with your life and, with a psotive mind. Nice work; and, thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 October 2015

Quite difficult to comment except that I disagree with you. Haven't known anybody who writes beautiful poetry that is not a nice person. Thanks.

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