Time you have taken my
Precious days and my
Favourite hours.
I withstand all like
A rock which keeps
The weight of the Earth.
Now, I am sand,
A gush of wind is making
Me dance and cry.
I want the soil,
A tunnel is bearing me
Towards a sea underneath.
I ran out of time than sat still in no time sublime you are poetess!
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We bow to time.Time transfers and spreads us in earth, water and sky.A short and lovely write, thanks for sharing.
This reaches me on a personal level. Definitely one of the best I've read in a while.
Beautiful write Neela. None can surpass time. We all have to walk along with time. when time was tough, that was the challenges we sailed across. Keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sad but beautiful. Sometimes one feels so loneli when one realises that all doors are closed. But there remains a way out. Nice poem. Liked it.