I Am Sand Poem by Neela Nath Das

I Am Sand

Rating: 5.0


Time you have taken my
Precious days and my
Favourite hours.
I withstand all like
A rock which keeps
The weight of the Earth.
Now, I am sand,
A gush of wind is making
Me dance and cry.
I want the soil,
A tunnel is bearing me
Towards a sea underneath.

Tuesday, April 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 04 April 2017

Sad but beautiful. Sometimes one feels so loneli when one realises that all doors are closed. But there remains a way out. Nice poem. Liked it.

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Chuy Amante 20 June 2017

I ran out of time than sat still in no time sublime you are poetess!

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Neela Nath Das 05 April 2017

I have not found such kind and sensitive friends anywhere except on poemhunter.com.Thank you my friends for reading my poems and boosting me up with your beautiful and worthy comments.

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Bharati Nayak 04 April 2017

We bow to time.Time transfers and spreads us in earth, water and sky.A short and lovely write, thanks for sharing.

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Taylor H 04 April 2017

This reaches me on a personal level. Definitely one of the best I've read in a while.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 April 2017

Beautiful write Neela. None can surpass time. We all have to walk along with time. when time was tough, that was the challenges we sailed across. Keep writing.

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