Monday, May 7, 2012

I Am Silence (For Dave) Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am the wolf,
hot breath panting,
teeth gleaming in the darkness...
feet running the path of the night.
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Eric Cockrell
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Juan Olivarez 11 May 2012

Awesome and awe inspiring.

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Valerie Dohren 08 May 2012

This is a beautifully penned poem. Rich tapestry of imagination.

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Dave Walker 08 May 2012

Really powerful poem. Really like it. Thank you. It's got a real nice tint of haunting to it. a great write.

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Smoky Hoss 07 May 2012

Powerful words, that move so well, and so smoothly. Beautiful.

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Eric Cockrell 07 May 2012

inspired by Dave Alan Walker's poem, 'Indian Forefathers'...

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