M. Asim Nehal

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I Am The Bee And My Sacrifice..... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I walked away from the rose,
so that it would grow and glow.
There are no regrets.
The hurt lingers with the mixture of
Pleasure, satisfaction, and gratitude.
I am happy that I was not selfish
I can carry myself now.
There may never be a day
that will not bring me to my knees
but that is the price of a love
I paid I suppose knowingly.
I am in love so I do not fear it.
I do not fear to roam free
Searching for other rose.
As I cannot suffer alone for the rest of the day
this is neither a tribute nor a self-punishment.
I wish to live and see more rose like this again.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss, sacrifice

Form: Dramatic Monologue


Comments about I Am The Bee And My Sacrifice..... by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/22/2016 11:18:00 AM)


    I can carry myself now. And to move on! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/20/2015 11:00:00 PM)


    Verily, your sacrifice is adorable (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2015 1:43:00 PM)


    LOVE, Sacrifice is thy another name, Awesome poem. Masterpiece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015



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